That was dank
I liked the style of the art, but I think the pacing was much too rushed especially towards the end. Also the whispering voice over would have been much better if it was more relaxed and less forced. I can tell because I do a lot of voice over work and it sounds like you were whispering very loudly to make up for not having a very sensitive mic.
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